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flavor: rewrite rhythm-only lines, fix B2 voice-pass grammar scars, add lines
- Rewrite the LootDropCommon offenders and ~20 other lines that had the
cadence but no concrete detail (per VOICE_CANON craft rules)
- Fix 7 grammar scars from the third-person-to-first-person B2 pass
("...and am not worth picking up" where the subject wasn't TwinBee)
- Replace generic "every RPG" references with specific ones
- Add new lines across ambient/GM/housing/NPC pools, incl. funny-word
register (kerfuffle, skedaddle, lollygagging) played straight
- New Thom Krooke line follows the pet-first arc
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"The kobolds are not slaves. The kobolds are clergy. They serve voluntarily, in shifts, with rotation, and the rotation is run by elders who have written sermons. I respect the organization and note the kobold scale-sorcerers are graduates, not recruits.",
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"The hoard is not random. Each piece is catalogued in Infernax's memory, by location and by year of acquisition. He will know if you take a single coin. I suggest not taking a single coin and instead taking the items the design doc expects you to take — those have been pre-cleared.",
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"The Dragon Hoard mechanic exists because Infernax does not lose track of his coins. Killing him releases his hold on the catalogue. The 50d10 × 100 coin drop is the entire pile relaxing for the first time in eight centuries. I respect the math and note the rest of the surface economy will too.",
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"Infernax has had three challengers in the last eight hundred years. Two were heroes. One was a younger dragon. He kept the younger dragon's skull as a paperweight on a treaty desk that has not been used since. I note the paperweight is in the treasury, on the third shelf, and am not worth picking up — picking it up triggers his attention from anywhere on the mountain.",
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"Infernax has had three challengers in the last eight hundred years. Two were heroes. One was a younger dragon. He kept the younger dragon's skull as a paperweight on a treaty desk that has not been used since. I note the paperweight is in the treasury, on the third shelf, and is not worth picking up — picking it up triggers his attention from anywhere on the mountain.",
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"The Young Red dragons in the outer chambers are his children. Or his grandchildren. Or unrelated and tolerated. Infernax does not clarify and I have not asked. They are loyal in the way that loyal works for dragons, which is to say: they will fight you, but they will not die for him, and the distinction matters more than it should.",
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"The kobold scale-sorcerers cast through bloodline. The bloodline traces back to a single clutch laid in the magma chamber three centuries ago. I note the entire sorcerous gene pool of this zone is one extended family and that they all know each other's names.",
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}
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