flavor: rewrite rhythm-only lines, fix B2 voice-pass grammar scars, add lines

- Rewrite the LootDropCommon offenders and ~20 other lines that had the
  cadence but no concrete detail (per VOICE_CANON craft rules)
- Fix 7 grammar scars from the third-person-to-first-person B2 pass
  ("...and am not worth picking up" where the subject wasn't TwinBee)
- Replace generic "every RPG" references with specific ones
- Add new lines across ambient/GM/housing/NPC pools, incl. funny-word
  register (kerfuffle, skedaddle, lollygagging) played straight
- New Thom Krooke line follows the pet-first arc

internal/flavor/twinbee_ambient_flavor.go

@@ -34,6 +34,10 @@ var AmbientMonologue = []string{
 	"The map in your pack has folded itself one extra time while you weren't looking. I decline to unfold it for science.",
 	"Your own footsteps echo back to you a half-second late, in slightly the wrong order. Noted. I'm choosing to walk in silence for a bit.",
 	"A long, slow scrape happens two rooms over. Then nothing. I waited for a second scrape. There wasn't one. The first scrape was the whole sentence.",
+	"I organized the ration wrappers by crinkle volume while you slept. There are four tiers. I will not be presenting the findings, but the findings exist.",
+	"A moth has been circling the torch for an hour with total commitment and no plan. I relate to it more than I intend to say out loud.",
+	"I counted your snores and cross-referenced them against the dungeon's ambient groans. Twice they harmonized. I have no notes. It was lovely.",
+	"A snail is crossing the camp. At current pace it reaches your boot by morning. I have elected not to interfere with its schedule and expect you to extend it the same courtesy.",
 }
 
 // ─────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────
@@ -48,6 +52,7 @@ var AmbientNoise = []string{
 	"Stones shift overhead in a way that is not settling and not random. Something walked across the ceiling. I'm choosing not to elaborate on what 'across the ceiling' implies.",
 	"A horn sounds, very far away — the kind of horn that's a signal to a thing that signals to more things. I acknowledge the chain.",
 	"You hear someone whistling your name. You don't have that name. The whistler is workshopping options.",
+	"Somewhere below, something counted to four and stopped. The counting has not resumed. I preferred it when it was counting.",
 }
 
 // ─────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────
@@ -74,6 +79,7 @@ var AmbientLuckyFind = []string{
 	"You step on something flat. It is a coin. It is also two more coins under the first coin. I suspect a coin-laying creature and choose not to share the theory.",
 	"A skeleton you walked past three days ago has, on review, a small purse you missed. I retrieve it with the discretion of a librarian recovering an overdue book.",
 	"You find coins in the lining of your own cloak. They were always there. I gently suggest counting your pockets more often.",
+	"There is a coin at the bottom of the waterskin. I have questions, beginning with how long you have been drinking past it.",
 }
 
 // ─────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────

internal/flavor/twinbee_expedition_flavor.go

@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ var ExpeditionStart = []string{
 	"An expedition. Not a run — an expedition. There's a difference. I'll explain the difference over the coming days and the explanation will be mostly experiential.",
 	"Horizon checked, then supplies, then you. In that order. 'Alright,' I say, with the quiet energy of something that has been looking forward to this. 'Let's go.'",
 	"You're not here for a quick visit. I know the difference between someone passing through and someone committing. You're committing. I appreciate the commitment.",
-	"Like the opening screen of a long RPG — the kind that asks for your name and warns you to find a comfortable position because this is going to take a while. I've found a comfortable position. I suggest you do the same.",
+	"Like starting Dragon Quest VII. Two hours of errands before the game permits a single fight, and the people who love it love it for exactly that. This is going to take a while. I have found a comfortable position. I suggest you do the same.",
 }
 
 // ─────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ var ExpeditionBoredomStart = []string{
 // ─────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────
 
 var MorningBriefingGeneric = []string{
-	"Another day in the dungeon. Said without resignation. The dungeon is still full of things worth doing and you are still the person to do them.",
+	"Another day in the dungeon. Morning count: you, me, the rations, one sword, and zero regrets logged before breakfast. Regrets logged before breakfast are the only ones that stick. Clean sheet. Out we go.",
 	"Morning. The dungeon has been quiet since you camped. Relative to what a dungeon considers quiet, which is not what you'd consider quiet, but everyone adjusts.",
 	"I've been watching the entrance to the camp since approximately three in the morning. Nothing came. Mentioned casually; no particular reaction expected.",
 	"Day [N]. The numbers are climbing. There's something satisfying about the numbers climbing — it means you're still here, which is always the first thing to confirm.",
@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ var MorningBriefingDay14 = []string{
 }
 
 var MorningBriefingDay21 = []string{
-	"Three weeks. I've run out of historical comparisons for this. Three weeks is its own category. You have made a category. I report this as a fact and also as something that doesn't entirely have words yet.",
+	"Three weeks. The record book keeps a page for runs past twenty days. The page has three entries. One is you. One is a dwarf named Hensel. The third entry is water-damaged, and I have chosen to believe it also says Hensel.",
 	"Day twenty-one. I tried to write a clever framing for this morning's briefing and gave up halfway through, settling instead on the simplest version: 'You're still here.' That's the briefing. The rest is logistics.",
 	"Three weeks down. The dungeon has stopped being a place you're visiting and become a place you live in for now. I note the shift — the way you check rooms without being asked, the way the supply count is already in your head. The dungeon notices too.",
 }
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ var MorningBriefingDay21 = []string{
 
 var EveningRecapGeneric = []string{
 	"End of day [N]. Ledger tallied. The column marked 'survived' has another entry. I consider this column the most important one.",
-	"Day closes. I review what happened and find, on balance, more right than wrong — which in a dungeon is the operating definition of a good day.",
+	"Day closes. The ledger says: three rooms, one fight you picked, one fight that picked you, and a door you had the sense to leave shut. I have audited worse days. I have audited far worse doors.",
 	"Evening. The rooms behind you are cleared. The rooms ahead are not. Always true; never less relevant. Rest now. The math doesn't change overnight.",
 	"I compile the day: what was learned, what was fought, what was found. File it in the mental ledger I've been keeping since you entered. The ledger is favorable.",
 	"Like the experience screen at the end of a dungeon floor in Etrian Odyssey — the numbers settle, the progress registers, and for a moment the whole thing makes sense. I give you that moment.",
@@ -137,7 +137,7 @@ var EveningRecapNothingHappened = []string{
 // ─────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────
 
 var CampEstablished = []string{
-	"Camp established. I survey the perimeter with the efficiency of someone who has done this many times and learned from every time it went wrong.",
+	"Camp established. I walk the perimeter once for threats and once for acoustics, because a camp that echoes is a camp that advertises. This one holds its sound. Approved.",
 	"The camp goes up. I approve of the location — cleared room, defensible entry, no obvious curse residue. Could be worse. I've seen worse.",
 	"You set camp. I check the sightlines, the doors, the sound-bleed from the next room. Acceptable. Settling in for the night watch.",
 	"A camp in the middle of a dungeon. Either brave or pragmatic; I've stopped trying to distinguish between the two. Either way, the camp is set. Either way, I'm watching.",
@@ -312,7 +312,7 @@ var RegionTransitDeparture = []string{
 
 var RegionTransitArrival = []string{
 	"You arrive in [REGION_NEXT]. I survey, take in the new geometry, and update the working assumptions. 'Different shape,' I say. 'Same general principle. We learn what wants to kill us here, and we get there first.'",
-	"[REGION_NEXT] receives you. I note the temperature, the sound, the things-not-said-by-the-room-but-implied. A region is not just a place. It's a posture. I adopt the new one and suggest you do as well.",
+	"[REGION_NEXT] receives you. I catalogue the differences: colder by about one coat, quieter by exactly one birdsong, and the dust on this side of the boundary shows a single set of tracks. The tracks are leaving. Noted. Adopting the local caution.",
 	"Boundary crossed. The day gets stamped in the log — one full day spent in transit, supplies adjusted, the wandering that happened on the way handled and filed. We are here now. The next stretch is what it is.",
 }
 
@@ -321,7 +321,7 @@ var RegionTransitArrival = []string{
 // ─────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────
 
 var ExtractionVoluntary = []string{
-	"Extraction. I note the decision and respect it — knowing when to leave is a skill, not a failure, and I've watched enough expeditions end wrong to deeply appreciate the ones that end right.",
+	"Extraction. For the record, the ledger keeps two columns for expeditions that reached the door: 'left' and 'was left of.' You are in the first column. The first column is the good column.",
 	"You call the extraction and I begin the route out immediately. No argument, no editorializing. There will be time for the debrief later. The first priority is the door.",
 	"The dungeon doesn't like this. I can tell by the way the corridors feel as you head back out — a resistance that isn't structural, just atmospheric. The zone wanted more. It doesn't get more today. I lead the way.",
 	"Withdrawing with intent. I catalogue what you have — the loot, the XP, the knowledge of where the rooms are for the return — and convert the exit into preparation. This isn't retreat. This is the start of the next attempt.",
@@ -353,7 +353,7 @@ var ExpeditionResume = []string{
 // ─────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────
 
 var MilestoneFirstNight = []string{
-	"You survived the first night. I note this milestone specifically because not everyone does, and those who do carry something from it that changes how the rest of the expedition goes. You have that now. Already noticed.",
+	"You survived the first night. Somewhere around the third watch you rolled over, said a word I will not be repeating back to you, and slept on. The dungeon spent that same hour deciding you were not worth waking. Both of you were right.",
 	"Night one survived. I make a small mark in the corner of the manifest — the kind of mark you make for the things that count more than they look. First nights count. I've been in dungeons where they were the last nights too. This wasn't one of those.",
 	"Day two morning. The first night is behind you, which means the first watch is behind me, which means a thing worth confirming has been confirmed: you sleep through the noises that matter and wake for the ones that don't. That's a survival skill. Logged.",
 }

internal/flavor/twinbee_gm_flavor.go

@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ var RoomEntryGeneric = []string{
 	"The room is quiet. I appreciate quiet. Quiet means the enemies haven't spotted you yet. Yet.",
 	"Forward. Always forward. I once tried going backward in a dungeon. It looped. This one might too.",
 	"Stock of the situation: ceiling intact, floor suspicious, walls leaning in slightly. Proceed.",
-	"You've cleared the room. I give a small, dignified nod. 'One continues,' I say, in the voice of someone who has seen this before and am choosing optimism anyway.",
+	"You've cleared the room. I give a small, dignified nod. 'One continues,' I say, in the voice of someone who has seen this before and is choosing optimism anyway.",
 	"The corridor ahead is long and straight. I find long straight corridors meditative. Also concerning. Mostly concerning.",
 	"A torch sputters on the wall. I light it mentally. 'It would be a shame,' I say, 'to come all this way and trip over something.'",
 }
@@ -124,7 +124,7 @@ var CombatStart = []string{
 	"They've seen you. The kind of seeing that comes with intent. I suggest acting first.",
 	"FIGHT. I don't need to say more than that but I will absolutely say more than that.",
 	"Roll for initiative. This is the part I've been looking forward to since the Entry Room.",
-	"And we're in combat. I remind you to breathe, track your conditions, and remember that your character's survival is not guaranteed but am definitely preferred.",
+	"And we're in combat. I remind you to breathe, track your conditions, and remember that your character's survival is not guaranteed but is definitely preferred.",
 	"Something about your posture or your smell or your general presence has been found unacceptable. Combat begins.",
 	"I press start. Player one, it's your turn.",
 	"The enemy acts first — or thinks it does. I watch your dice like they're the only thing in the room, which, right now, they are.",
@@ -133,6 +133,7 @@ var CombatStart = []string{
 	"A wild encounter has appeared. I resist the urge to play the Pokémon battle music. Only barely.",
 	"They didn't want a fight. They wanted an easy meal. I'm about to demonstrate the difference. Your dice will do the actual demonstrating.",
 	"The tension peaks. Time slows. This is exactly the energy of the boss door opening in Mega Man. Except you didn't get to pick your loadout.",
+	"A kerfuffle, then. I had this logged as a fracas, but they drew weapons, and weapons upgrade a fracas to a kerfuffle. Anything beyond this point is a melee, which is the technical term.",
 }
 
 // ─────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────
@@ -141,7 +142,7 @@ var CombatStart = []string{
 
 var CombatVictory = []string{
 	"The last one drops. I allow a moment of silence for anyone who wanted a longer fight.",
-	"Victory. I would cue the jingle — the little three-note one that plays in every RPG after every fight — but I prefer to let the moment breathe.",
+	"Victory. I would cue the fanfare, the Final Fantasy one that plays even when you won by a single hit point while poisoned and on fire. Especially then. But I prefer to let the moment breathe.",
 	"Well fought. I make note of what you did well. There were things done well. I noticed.",
 	"They are defeated. You are not. In my experience, this is the correct outcome and worth a moment of genuine appreciation.",
 	"PLAYER WIN. I say this in full caps and mean it.",
@@ -166,6 +167,7 @@ var CombatRetreat = []string{
 	"Noted for the record: running is not losing. Running is data collection with legs.",
 	"The dungeon will be there. You will also be there — later, better prepared. I approve of this logic.",
 	"You've retreated to safety. I reset the encounter. Rest. Think. Return with a plan that has more 'survive' in it.",
+	"Skedaddle is the technical term and I will hear no other. Executed cleanly, all limbs accounted for. The ledger records a skedaddle of the highest order.",
 }
 
 // ─────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────
@@ -206,6 +208,7 @@ var Nat1 = []string{
 	"The attack misses in a way that will be funny later. I promise it will be funny later. It is not funny right now.",
 	"A natural one is just the universe asking you to try differently. I'm an optimist about natural ones, mostly.",
 	"Your sword finds everything in the room except the enemy. The wall, the ceiling, the floor, your dignity. Not the enemy. I'll mention this once and then never again.",
+	"One. The die rolled off the table, hit a boot, and came back up one, as if it left to think it over and returned with conviction.",
 }
 
 // ─────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────
@@ -329,7 +332,7 @@ var TrapTriggered = []string{
 var LoreLines = []string{
 	"I settle in and prepare to speak at length, because I've been waiting for this question since you entered and I have a lot of thoughts.",
 	"Ah. A good question. I have context for this. I have more context than will fit comfortably in one telling but I'll try to prioritize.",
-	"The history of this place is long and not entirely flattering to anyone involved. I begin at the beginning, which is not actually the beginning, but am the closest I can find.",
+	"The history of this place is long and not entirely flattering to anyone involved. I begin at the beginning, which is not actually the beginning, but is the closest I can find.",
 	"I consult what I know — which is more than most, less than everything, and presented in order of relevance to your immediate survival.",
 	"Sit with this for a moment. What you're standing in has a story and I believe knowing it will change how you fight in it. Stories are tactical documents if you read them right.",
 	"You want lore? I have lore. I have so much lore that the challenge is not having it but choosing which pieces are useful and which are just fascinating.",
@@ -358,7 +361,7 @@ var ItemFound = []string{
 	"Something catches the light that isn't supposed to be here. I watch you reach for it with the specific alertness of someone who has seen cursed items do cursed things. It appears fine. I relax incrementally.",
 	"Loot. I say this word with genuine reverence. The whole system — the dungeon, the enemies, the traps — exists in part to produce this moment. I think it's worth it.",
 	"A chest. Unlocked. I note the unlocked status and consider what that might mean. Probably nothing. Possibly something. You open it while I consider.",
-	"The item is good. I evaluate it quickly — the stats, the rarity, the class match — and nod with the confidence of someone who has seen a lot of items and know when one is worth finding.",
+	"The item is good. I evaluate it quickly — the stats, the rarity, the class match — and nod with the confidence of someone who has seen a lot of items and knows when one is worth finding.",
 	"That's a rare one. I've seen fewer of those than common ones, by definition, but that doesn't stop me from being specifically pleased each time.",
 	"Like finding the Beam Sword in Kirby, the Boomerang in Zelda, the P Wing in Super Mario 3 — the right item at the right time changes what's possible. I think this might be that item. I hope it is.",
 	"Equipment upgrade. I watch the math update — new AC, new attack bonus, new possibilities — and file this moment under 'things going right.'",
@@ -402,6 +405,7 @@ var TauntResponses = []string{
 	"You taunt me. I smile. The smile does not reach the eyes, because I don't have eyes per se, but the quality of the smile communicates clearly. 'Proceed,' I say.",
 	"In Gradius, you could powerup into overconfidence and lose everything in one hit. I mention this as a purely historical observation.",
 	"I accept the taunt with grace. Also generate a trap for the next room with specific energy. These two events are unrelated. I maintain this position legally.",
+	"Hornswoggled. By you. I write the word in the ledger and it looks ridiculous there, which I suspect was the plan all along.",
 }
 
 // ─────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────
@@ -430,6 +434,7 @@ var IdleLines = []string{
 	"The enemies are patient. Patience is one of their few virtues. I advise not testing the limits of their patience because those limits are lower than the patience suggests.",
 	"I hum something that sounds like the waiting music from Dr. Mario. It is not ominous. It is mildly ominous. I adjust.",
 	"The dungeon does not rush. The dungeon has time. I, however, am beginning to wonder if you've fallen asleep and am prepared to narrate events accordingly.",
+	"There is a word for this and the word is lollygagging. I don't get many chances to deploy it. Thank you for this one. Now move.",
 }
 
 // ─────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────
@@ -464,7 +469,7 @@ var ConditionApplied = []string{
 	"You've been afflicted. I note the condition, its duration, and the mechanical consequences, then note the saving throw that might end it early. Details matter here.",
 	"Something is wrong with you now that wasn't wrong before. I catalog it without judgment and suggest addressing it before it addresses you.",
 	"Condition acquired. I process this the way a good DM processes bad news: honestly, quickly, and with an immediate pivot toward solutions.",
-	"Like the status screen turning an unfriendly color in a JRPG — the condition is visible, the effect is real, and I would very much like you to resolve it.",
+	"Like your sprite turning that little poison green in Final Fantasy while the walk animation carries on regardless. The condition is visible, the effect is real, and I would very much like you to resolve it.",
 	"The debuff lands. I name it, explain it, and remind you: conditions end. Keep fighting until this one does.",
 }
 
@@ -485,10 +490,10 @@ var SaveSuccess = []string{
 // ─────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────
 
 var SaveFailed = []string{
-	"The save fails. I watch the condition take hold with the resignation of someone who has seen this before and know there's a path through it, just not a comfortable one.",
+	"The save fails. I watch the condition take hold with the resignation of someone who has seen this before and knows there's a path through it, just not a comfortable one.",
 	"It lands. Whatever the enemy threw at you, the dice didn't cooperate. I note the condition and its duration and suggest dealing with it before it compounds.",
 	"Failed. The number wasn't enough and I was rooting for the number. The condition applies. Fight through it.",
-	"Like the NES game over screen — inevitable in this moment, fixable in the next. The save failed. The dungeon continues. So do you.",
+	"Like the bird in Ninja Gaiden that exists solely to shove you into the pit. Inevitable in this moment, fixable in the next. The save failed. The dungeon continues. So do you.",
 	"The effect takes hold and I'm already calculating how you get out of it, because that's my job: keep you oriented toward solutions even when the immediate situation is a problem.",
 }
 
@@ -502,7 +507,7 @@ var MoodAsidesHostile = []string{
 	"I'm not narrating this one in detail. You can read the room. Read it.",
 	"The dungeon offers me something to mention. I decline. You're on your own for color commentary.",
 	"I'm here. Watching. Not, currently, helping. There is a difference and you will feel it.",
-	"In the bad ending of every Castlevania, the protagonist gets less guidance than they did at the start. I have reached approximately that part of the playthrough.",
+	"Simon's Quest told you 'the morning sun has vanquished the horrible night' and then never said anything useful again. I have entered my Simon's Quest era.",
 	"I'm keeping several details to myself. The details would have been useful. I don't consider this my problem right now.",
 	"Whatever's in the next part of the room, I saw it and chose not to flag it. The mood is what it is.",
 	"I mutter something. You don't catch it. I do not repeat it.",
@@ -520,7 +525,7 @@ var MoodAsidesEffusive = []string{
 	"I lean in. The mood is good. Good moods, in my experience, lead to slightly more generous descriptions and slightly better odds of catching the small details.",
 	"This is the part of the run I'll tell other GMs about later. I make a small mental note and continue with visible enthusiasm.",
 	"I'm delighted. You can hear it in the pacing. You can hear it in the choice of adjectives. The dungeon is, briefly, on your side.",
-	"In the good ending of every JRPG, the world feels slightly warmer in the late game. I'm at that part of the playthrough and it shows.",
+	"Like the campfire scene in Chrono Trigger, where the game just lets everyone sit down for one night and nobody dies. I'm at that part of the playthrough and it shows.",
 	"I'm not normally given to footnotes, but I'm about to add a footnote. It will probably be useful. I'm in that kind of mood.",
 	"The mood is high. For the next stretch, I'm more likely to mention the loose flagstone, the suspicious tapestry, the thing on the ceiling. Take advantage.",
 	"I hum a victory fanfare softly to myself. It is not earned yet. I'm being optimistic on your behalf.",

internal/flavor/twinbee_housing_flavor.go

@@ -33,6 +33,7 @@ var ThomKrookeMortgageRate = []string{
 	"Good morning, friends! The ARM rate this week is {rate}% — and with Thom Krooke's modest service margin, your mortgage rate sits at {effective}%. All payments process Sunday. Thank you for your continued trust!",
 	"Weekly rate update! FRED reports {rate}% this week, so your effective rate with Thom Krooke is {effective}%. Nothing to worry about — Thom Krooke monitors these things so you don't have to. Mostly.",
 	"Rate check! The market says {rate}%, Thom Krooke adds a small, reasonable {margin}%, and your total comes to {effective}%. Thom Krooke appreciates your understanding of the margin. It keeps the lights on. Literally!",
+	"Rate news! The market did something this week that the newspapers describe with an arrow. The result for you is {effective}%. Thom Krooke does not fully understand the arrow either, but the arrow is binding. Budget however you must. The pet's portion is not part of 'however.'",
 }
 
 var ThomKrookeMortgageRateUp = []string{
@@ -127,6 +128,7 @@ var PastelNoteLevel1 = []string{
 	"Good day! The herb garden got some attention, the pets were walked (or equivalent — the fish were observed), and I collected the income. I accidentally shelved three items in the wrong slots but found them eventually. Everything is where it should be. Mostly. The weapons rack might be slightly reorganized.",
 	"Note from Pastel: pets fed, garden tended, income collected. I made one small mistake with the supply manifest — added a column that didn't need to be there — but the numbers are right, the column is just extra. Please ignore the extra column.",
 	"All tasks completed! Well — most tasks. The greenhouse watering got a little delayed because I was making sure the workshop tools were hung correctly and then it was later than I thought. The plants look fine. Probably fine. I'll check again in the morning.",
+	"Fed the pets, watered the garden, and spent forty minutes retrieving the trowel from where the small pet had buried it. It was buried with ceremony, judging by the arrangement of pebbles on top. The trowel is back on its hook. I am watching the small pet.",
 }
 
 // ─────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────
@@ -204,6 +206,7 @@ var PastelPetEvent = []string{
 	"Your pet found something in the back of the storage room that I couldn't identify. I've put it on the workshop table. It doesn't seem dangerous. It is definitely something.",
 	"One of the pets has been sitting by the expedition outpost since this morning. I think it knows you've been out a long time. Everything is fine. I just thought you'd want to know.",
 	"The pets were restless today — I think they can tell you've been in a Tier 4 zone because they get like this around Day 10. Fed them an extra portion. They settled. They'll be glad to see you.",
+	"One of the pets discovered its own reflection in the vault door today. Negotiations lasted most of the afternoon. Both parties eventually withdrew with dignity, which I thought was big of them.",
 }
 
 var PastelLevelUpNote = []string{

internal/flavor/twinbee_npc_flavor.go

@@ -15,6 +15,7 @@ var MistyGreeting = []string{
 	"'Don't stand in the doorway,' Misty says, before you've even finished arriving.",
 	"Misty is already talking before you're settled. This is how it always goes.",
 	"'I wondered when you'd show up.' She says it like she'd actually been counting the days. She had.",
+	"'Boots.' Misty says the one word and points at the mat. The conversation resumes once the boots comply.",
 }
 
 // ─────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────
@@ -36,6 +37,7 @@ var MistySkillFail = []string{
 	"'No,' Misty says, and returns to what she was doing.",
 	"Misty looks at you like you've asked a question that doesn't deserve an answer. She's not wrong.",
 	"'Come back when you actually know what you're asking.' Misty's version of helpful feedback.",
+	"Misty lets the silence answer for her. The silence is thorough.",
 }
 
 // ─────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────
@@ -79,6 +81,7 @@ var ArinaGreeting = []string{
 	"'Perfect timing,' Arina says, in the tone of someone for whom most timings are perfect because everything is interesting. 'I was just thinking about—' She stops. 'Actually, what do you need?'",
 	"Arina has three things she's in the middle of and immediately sets all of them down to give you her full attention, which is considerable.",
 	"'You came back!' Arina says, as if there was any question. In her experience there sometimes isn't.",
+	"'I was just — okay, two things, no, three things—' Arina holds up a finger for each, and then a fourth finger surprises her. 'Four things. You first, though.'",
 }
 
 // ─────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────
@@ -91,6 +94,7 @@ var ArinaIdentify = []string{
 	"Arina holds the item up to the light, turns it twice, says something under her breath that might be an incantation or just enthusiasm, and then begins a very efficient explanation.",
 	"'Oh I know what this is.' The words land quickly, confidently, correctly. Arina has seen a lot of magic items and she remembers all of them.",
 	"Arina goes still in the specific way she goes still when magic is doing something she finds genuinely surprising. 'That's — huh. Okay. That's new. Let me—' The identification follows, along with three questions she has that you're under no obligation to answer.",
+	"Arina sniffs the item, which is not a recognized identification technique, and then names it correctly anyway. 'The nose knows,' she says, in the voice of someone who will not be defending the methodology.",
 }
 
 // ─────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────

internal/flavor/twinbee_resource_flavor.go

@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ package flavor
 var HarvestForageSuccess = []string{
 	"The land gives something up. I watch you identify it with the quiet satisfaction of someone watching a skill be used correctly.",
 	"There — growing in a place that suggests it knows exactly what it's good for and has been waiting. You found it. I approve of the finding.",
-	"A Ranger's eye in a non-Ranger would have missed that entirely. I note the distinction.",
+	"You found it by the smell. Bruised stems, faintly peppery, which means something stepped on this patch within the hour and it grows back that fast. A Ranger taught me that trick. I never found out who taught you.",
 	"Like finding the hidden item block in a Mario level — you knew to look, you looked in the right place, and the thing that was always there is now yours.",
 	"The plant comes away cleanly. Good root structure, good potency. Mentally catalogued. Moving on.",
 }
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ var HarvestForageSuccess = []string{
 var HarvestMineSuccess = []string{
 	"The stone yields. I listen to the sound of it — the specific tone of rock giving up something it's been holding for a very long time.",
 	"Solid work. The ore comes out in a piece worth taking. I check the vein depth. There's more. There's always more if you're willing to dig.",
-	"Like the mining minigame in Stardew Valley, but with real consequences and no save file. I watch you extract the material with professional appreciation.",
+	"There's a note rock makes when it's ready to give. Duller, rounder, like knocking on a full barrel instead of an empty one. Third swing, you found the note. Some miners go twenty years and never hear it.",
 	"The wall gives up its contents without drama. I appreciate materials that cooperate.",
 	"Good strike. Clean extraction. I note the weight and the quality simultaneously.",
 }
@@ -31,9 +31,9 @@ var HarvestMineSuccess = []string{
 var HarvestScavengeSuccess = []string{
 	"There it is. Among the debris, the decay, the things that were left behind — something worth taking. I knew it was there. You found it. Pleased.",
 	"The room held something after all. I had estimated 60% odds and am updating the estimate to 'correct.'",
-	"Like finding the secret item in a dungeon chest that looked empty — you checked anyway. That's the habit. That's the discipline. I note both.",
+	"The chest looked empty. You knocked on the bottom anyway and it knocked back twice. Once for the bottom, once for the false bottom. I heard it too. I let you have the moment.",
 	"Scavenged. The word has a bad reputation it doesn't deserve. You found value in the discarded. I respect that entirely.",
-	"A Rogue's eye in a non-Rogue would have walked past this. I note the distinction.",
+	"You checked behind the crate that stood one inch too far from the wall. One inch. Ask any Rogue: that inch is the entire profession.",
 }
 
 var HarvestEssenceSuccess = []string{
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ var HarvestEssenceSuccess = []string{
 	"Drawn out cleanly. The Arcana check held and the essence responds to the knowledge behind it. I'm appropriately impressed.",
 	"Like tapping into a power source in Metroid — you knew the energy was there, you had the tool to reach it, you reached it. The vial fills.",
 	"The room releases something it didn't know it was holding. I watch the transfer and mark the yield in the ledger.",
-	"Essence harvested. Quality above average for this zone, below average for what you'd need to know to appreciate that distinction. I appreciate it on your behalf.",
+	"Essence harvested. Seventh decile for this zone, which is genuinely exciting to perhaps four people alive. I am one of them. It is a quiet life, but the charts are immaculate.",
 }
 
 var HarvestCommuneSuccess = []string{
@@ -55,8 +55,9 @@ var HarvestFishSuccess = []string{
 	"The line goes taut and I straighten up. Whatever's on the end of it, it came from somewhere deep and dark and it's yours now.",
 	"A catch. I identify it before you finish pulling it in — the coloring, the depth-marks, the specific opacity of its eyes. 'Good one,' I say, meaning it.",
 	"Fishing in a dungeon. I have opinions about fishing in dungeons and all of them are positive. The fish is landed. The opinions remain.",
-	"Like the fishing minigame in every RPG that ever had one — the moment the indicator hits perfect and everything pays off. Quiet delight, on my end.",
+	"Like landing the Hylian Loach. The fish the game never once required, the one you gave forty minutes to while the world stood ending, and the fisherman never asked why. This fish was optional too. That's what makes it yours.",
 	"The water gives up its catch with minimal argument. I respect fish that don't make it personal.",
+	"The fish comes up mid-argument with the hook and loses. I weigh it, log it, and admire it, in that order. The order is the job.",
 }
 
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@@ -68,6 +69,7 @@ var HarvestFail = []string{
 	"The attempt fails to produce anything useful. I mark the node and move on. Some rooms are stingier than others.",
 	"Not everything that looks like a resource is one. Filed under 'learned' and considered worth the attempt.",
 	"Empty-handed. I've seen this before and will see it again. The dungeon doesn't owe you anything. You ask anyway. That's the deal.",
+	"Nothing. The mushroom you spent four minutes prying loose is a rock. It was always a rock. I have struck it from the ledger and we will never speak of the rock again.",
 }
 
 // ─────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────
@@ -82,6 +84,7 @@ var HarvestInterrupt = []string{
 	"A patrol. Bad timing, or very good timing from their perspective. I set aside the harvest log and open the combat log.",
 	"The forage was going well until it wasn't. I measure the distance between you and the enemy, between the enemy and the door, and start calculating options at speed.",
 	"Interrupted. The node is still there. The enemy is also still there, in a more immediate way. I suggest addressing the more immediate thing first.",
+	"You were elbow-deep in the node when the growling started. Your priorities, observed and logged in order: ore, ore, growling, ore, sword.",
 }
 
 // ─────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────
@@ -93,6 +96,7 @@ var NodeDepleted = []string{
 	"Empty. The resource is gone. Something quietly melancholy about a depleted node and something practical about moving to the next one.",
 	"That's all it had. I confirm the node at zero and move on without ceremony.",
 	"Harvested clean. The room is now resource-dry until you rest and the dungeon replenishes. It will replenish. It always does.",
+	"Empty. You tap it twice more anyway, the way people press a lift button that's already lit. The node respects this exactly as much as the lift does.",
 }
 
 // ─────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────
@@ -102,7 +106,7 @@ var NodeDepleted = []string{
 var RichYield = []string{
 	"A rich vein. My assessment upgrades mid-harvest — more than expected, better quality than the zone average. This room was generous. Marked.",
 	"The node gives more than it should have. I note the anomaly with appreciation and decline to question it.",
-	"Like finding the rare item drop that you stopped expecting — the dungeon decided to be kind today, in this specific way, in this specific room. I take it. We take it. We do not look it in the mouth.",
+	"The vein forks behind the wall. Then forks again. I revise my estimate upward twice in one sentence, which I hate doing and am currently doing. We take all of it. We do not look it in the mouth.",
 	"Exceptional yield. I catalog the bonus material with the efficiency of someone who's been waiting for exactly this and prepared for it anyway.",
 	"More than the DC promised. The dungeon overdelivered. Unusual. Also completely welcome.",
 }
@@ -215,25 +219,28 @@ var PatrolEncounter = []string{
 // ─────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────
 
 var LootDropCommon = []string{
-	"They had something on them. I check it over. Common rarity — useful in the way that common things are useful, which is often.",
-	"Standard loot. Nothing that rewrites the story, but everything that keeps it going.",
-	"A drop. I catalog it efficiently and note: this is the economy of dungeons. Enemies have things. You take them. The loop continues.",
+	"They were carrying a coil of rope, half a candle, and a knife sharpened so many times it's mostly handle. I log all three. Somebody loved that knife once. It's yours now. That's dungeons.",
+	"Standard loot. Six copper, a whetstone, and a note that says REMEMBER THE THING. No further details. They did not, evidently, remember the thing.",
+	"I catalog the pockets. Then I find the second pocket sewn inside the first pocket, because I have been doing this a long time. So, apparently, had they.",
+	"A belt pouch. Inside: three teeth, none of them theirs, and a receipt. I don't read other people's receipts. I read the receipt. It was for soup.",
+	"Common drop. A tin whistle with one hole plugged with wax. Somewhere out there is a song missing a note, and now you own the reason.",
 }
 
 var LootDropUncommon = []string{
 	"Better than expected. I examine the drop with slightly elevated interest. Uncommon rarity — someone made this with intent.",
 	"An uncommon drop from a common enemy. Anomaly noted with satisfaction. The dungeon was generous in this room.",
 	"Uncommon. I turn it over once and nod. 'Keeper,' I say — which in my vocabulary means: this changes your math.",
+	"Uncommon. There's a maker's mark under the grip, two crossed nails. I don't know the smith. I know what their apprentices paid to train, because work this clean does not come out of cheap teachers.",
 }
 
 var LootDropRare = []string{
-	"I stop. Actually stop. 'That's rare,' I say, with the specific register of someone who uses the word correctly and use it seldom.",
+	"I stop. Actually stop. 'That's rare,' I say. I have said that word four times in my career. I keep count, because it is that kind of word.",
 	"A rare drop. I examine it the way you examine something that doesn't appear often — thoroughly, quietly, with appropriate appreciation.",
 	"The loot table gave you something uncommon and then kept going. Rare rarity. Filed in the column I reserve for things worth remembering.",
 }
 
 var LootDropLegendary = []string{
 	"I go very still. The drop sits in the light and I process what I am seeing. 'Legendary,' I say eventually. One word. That's all it needs.",
-	"Legendary rarity. I've seen a few of these in a long career and each time — each time — there is a moment that is separate from everything else. This is that moment. Pick it up carefully.",
+	"Legendary rarity. I have logged three of these in my career. The first one earned its bearer a statue. The second one is why there is a lake where Torbridge used to be. Pick it up carefully.",
 	"The dungeon produced a legendary item. I note the zone, the enemy, the day of the expedition, the Threat Clock value, the precise conditions. Some things deserve to be recorded completely.",
 }

internal/flavor/zone_dragons_lair_flavor.go

@@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ var LoreLinesDragonsLair = []string{
 	"The kobolds are not slaves. The kobolds are clergy. They serve voluntarily, in shifts, with rotation, and the rotation is run by elders who have written sermons. I respect the organization and note the kobold scale-sorcerers are graduates, not recruits.",
 	"The hoard is not random. Each piece is catalogued in Infernax's memory, by location and by year of acquisition. He will know if you take a single coin. I suggest not taking a single coin and instead taking the items the design doc expects you to take — those have been pre-cleared.",
 	"The Dragon Hoard mechanic exists because Infernax does not lose track of his coins. Killing him releases his hold on the catalogue. The 50d10 × 100 coin drop is the entire pile relaxing for the first time in eight centuries. I respect the math and note the rest of the surface economy will too.",
-	"Infernax has had three challengers in the last eight hundred years. Two were heroes. One was a younger dragon. He kept the younger dragon's skull as a paperweight on a treaty desk that has not been used since. I note the paperweight is in the treasury, on the third shelf, and am not worth picking up — picking it up triggers his attention from anywhere on the mountain.",
+	"Infernax has had three challengers in the last eight hundred years. Two were heroes. One was a younger dragon. He kept the younger dragon's skull as a paperweight on a treaty desk that has not been used since. I note the paperweight is in the treasury, on the third shelf, and is not worth picking up — picking it up triggers his attention from anywhere on the mountain.",
 	"The Young Red dragons in the outer chambers are his children. Or his grandchildren. Or unrelated and tolerated. Infernax does not clarify and I have not asked. They are loyal in the way that loyal works for dragons, which is to say: they will fight you, but they will not die for him, and the distinction matters more than it should.",
 	"The kobold scale-sorcerers cast through bloodline. The bloodline traces back to a single clutch laid in the magma chamber three centuries ago. I note the entire sorcerous gene pool of this zone is one extended family and that they all know each other's names.",
 }

internal/flavor/zone_sunken_temple_flavor.go

@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ var EliteRoomEntrySunkenTemple = []string{
 var AbolethTentacleMultiattackLines = []string{
 	"Three tentacles, three rolls. Each on-hit risks Diseased — no magical healing for 24 hours until cured. I say: 'Cleric's tools come back online tomorrow. Survive today.'",
 	"The Aboleth's tentacles arrive in sequence, three of them, the hits compounding. The disease isn't the damage — the disease is the design. Magical healing fails until you cleanse. I file this under 'durability problem.'",
-	"Three attacks, one turn. Any landing tentacle leaves a mark that locks out magical healing. I suggest potions, rest, and the kind of patience that pretends to be patience but am mostly grim arithmetic.",
+	"Three attacks, one turn. Any landing tentacle leaves a mark that locks out magical healing. I suggest potions, rest, and the kind of patience that pretends to be patience but is mostly grim arithmetic.",
 }
 
 // Enslave: recharge 6; WIS DC 14 or Charmed; player skips turn, drifts toward Aboleth.