- Rewrite the LootDropCommon offenders and ~20 other lines that had the
cadence but no concrete detail (per VOICE_CANON craft rules)
- Fix 7 grammar scars from the third-person-to-first-person B2 pass
("...and am not worth picking up" where the subject wasn't TwinBee)
- Replace generic "every RPG" references with specific ones
- Add new lines across ambient/GM/housing/NPC pools, incl. funny-word
register (kerfuffle, skedaddle, lollygagging) played straight
- New Thom Krooke line follows the pet-first arc
Sweep of the remaining four twinbee_*.go flavor files (gm, resource,
ambient, housing). Every 'TwinBee [verb]' / 'TwinBee says' / 'TwinBee
notes' rewritten into first-person or implicit-subject voice. Jokes,
references, and pacing preserved; a few lines got slightly sharper
punchlines on the way through.
Files touched:
- twinbee_gm_flavor.go (~270 lines, all narration pools)
- twinbee_resource_flavor.go (~100 lines, harvest/fish/loot pools)
- twinbee_ambient_flavor.go (~40 lines, between-day ticker)
- twinbee_housing_flavor.go (7 lines; Thom Krooke 3rd-person and
Pastel 1st-person voices preserved)
twinbee_npc_flavor.go intentionally untouched: those are Pete
announcements referring to TwinBee, which is correctly third-person
(different speaker).
DO-NOT-REWRITE headers replaced with voice-convention notes covering
future additions.
prosolis