Phase 5: voice consistency pass

Tier-1 voice-consistency pass: whole-document LLM review surfacing passages
that read tonally out of place (formal/over-polished/paraphrased-too-closely),
as honey-decorated `voice` flags with no correction (awareness-only).

- internal/llm/voice.go: RunVoice sends the whole document (no TruncateDoc),
  MaxTokens 2048, 20s per-doc floor (VoiceInterval). Standalone voice prompt
  in prompts.go (not bundled with the grammar checkpoint, per spec).
- internal/suggestions: POST /api/docs/:id/voice. replacePending is now
  family-scoped (pendingScope) so grammar and voice never clobber each other's
  pending flags; both passes return the unified pending set. check/voice share
  one runPass helper. TestVoicePassCoexists covers both directions.
- Frontend: api.voiceDoc, useCheckpoint voicing/runVoice, honey "Check my
  voice" toolbar pill, breathing honey dot in StatusBar.

Claude-Session: https://claude.ai/code/session_016Yr6jELuRc7hyzYLccQKZd
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@@ -33,6 +33,44 @@ func CheckpointMessages(contentText string) []Message {
}
}
// voiceSystemPrompt drives the Tier-1 voice-consistency pass. It is a distinct
// pass from the grammar checkpoint (spec: "do not bundle them") — the model
// reads the whole document to learn the writer's natural voice, then flags
// passages that read as tonally out of place. `replacement` is null: these are
// awareness-only, with no correction to apply.
const voiceSystemPrompt = `You are a warm, encouraging writing assistant helping someone who speaks English as a second language. ` +
`You are reviewing a COMPLETE document for VOICE CONSISTENCY only — not grammar.
Read the whole document to learn the writer's natural voice, then identify any passages (2 or more sentences) ` +
`that feel tonally inconsistent with the surrounding writing — unusually formal, unusually polished, or phrased ` +
`in a way that differs from the writer's established voice elsewhere in the document. These often signal text ` +
`that was paraphrased too closely from another source. Do not flag the first paragraph (there is no baseline yet). ` +
`Do not flag grammar or spelling mistakes — only voice.
Respond ONLY with valid JSON. No preamble, no markdown fences. Format:
{
"suggestions": [
{
"original": "exact passage from the document that feels inconsistent",
"replacement": null,
"explanation": "friendly one-sentence note, e.g. 'This passage sounds more formal than the rest of your writing — worth reviewing.'",
"type": "voice"
}
]
}
If the voice is consistent throughout, return: {"suggestions": []}`
// VoiceMessages builds the message array for a voice-consistency pass. Unlike
// the checkpoint, the caller passes the WHOLE document (no truncation) — voice
// consistency is judged against the established voice everywhere else.
func VoiceMessages(contentText string) []Message {
return []Message{
{Role: "system", Content: voiceSystemPrompt},
{Role: "user", Content: contentText},
}
}
// askPetalSystemTemplate is the Ask Petal tutor prompt. The suggestion context
// is interpolated in; the user's own messages are appended after this system
// turn by the caller.

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package llm
import (
"context"
"time"
)
// VoiceInterval is the minimum gap between voice-consistency passes for one
// document. The pass is whole-document and slow, and it runs on an explicit
// user action rather than a typing cadence, so this floor only guards the
// inference endpoint against the button being mashed.
const VoiceInterval = 20 * time.Second
// RunVoice sends the WHOLE document — deliberately NOT TruncateDoc'd, since
// voice consistency is judged against the established voice everywhere else —
// for a Tier-1 voice pass and parses the JSON result. It reuses the checkpoint's
// tolerant parser and a larger token budget, since one pass may flag several
// passages. Each flag carries a null replacement (awareness-only).
func RunVoice(ctx context.Context, client LLMClient, contentText string) ([]RawSuggestion, error) {
raw, err := client.Complete(ctx, CompletionRequest{
Messages: VoiceMessages(contentText),
MaxTokens: 2048,
Temperature: 0.3,
RepetitionPenalty: 1.15,
TopP: 0.9,
Stop: []string{"```", "\n\n\n\n"},
})
if err != nil {
return nil, err
}
return ParseCheckpoint(raw)
}